“Checks and Balances” 1st Place Winner

Louis Kahn’s Ghost: National Assembly Building, Dhaka, Bangladesh

by Nafisa A. Iqbal
National Assembly Building under purple drips

Editor’s Note

The National Assembly Building, designed by American architect Louis Kahn, was originally commissioned by the Pakistani government to bolster influence and maintain control over what is now Bangladesh. Iqbal’s poem emulates this building, using architecture to embody the history and consequences of those seeking, maintaining, and manipulating power within it. Em dashes act as a scaffold, creating swaths of blank space to reflect the structure’s bare, modernist Western style and highlighting the void of democracy in a landmark said to represent it. We’re delighted to bring you this dimensional and thought-provoking piece as our finalist for February’s Checks and Balances challenge.

1961, construction began———the Architect drawing a dream———in poured concrete.
A substantial challenge———to give lodging to Democracy———to give form to the State when she
is still forming———coagulating from Partition and Injustice———nebulous, indeterminate. 1971,
the people demanded Revolution———Independence and Liberation, lofty ideals———petrified
Architect granted Absolution by his own demise. 3000 Moons later———completed
posthumously———they say his ghost haunts the Rotunda———whispers
to Members of Parliament———Spirit & Science———Spirit & Science———Spirit & Science——
—conjecturing whether he got it right———the precise Configuration of Arches to Atriums———
Courts to Porticoes———Aperture to Volume. It’s true———he had not envisioned the serene lake
as Moat———the heftas Fortress———the Machine Gun Military Men patrolling its walls———
the questionable use of that teal carpet———let alone, the Dictator———to whom his specter
gesticulates wildly———something about civic duty———having lost his voice.

Nafisa A. Iqbal

“Checks and Balances” 1st Place Winner
Nafisa A. Iqbal (she/they) is a Bangladeshi writer holding an MFA from Columbia University, where she was awarded the Felipe P. De Alba fellowship. Their work has appeared or is forthcoming in Passages North, Fiddlehead, The Rumpus, AAWW’s The Margins, and Fourth Genre among many others. In 2024, they were the finalist for the Waasnode Prize and won the Lascaux Prize in Poetry. Her poems have been nominated for Best New Poets 2024 and 2025. Their work was listed as a Notable Essay of 2024 in the Best American Essays 2025 anthology.

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